not there yet my fren
the animation is not good enough. camera angles are not suitable... some are ok.. just ok... the graphics, u have ur style which is a slightly better than a stick figure cos it has a face but that's just not good graphic... i'll give a ten if u come up with detailed high end graphics. there's no style to it. sound sucks... compose ur own song. or at least choose something unrecogniseable so that ppl do not compare. learn ur cinematography, boy.
Thoughtful flash, i like it very much! and a good msg...wonderfully animated...
Ur Da Man
Well, great job there! Nice relaxing music...and i think the other reviewers should give some points for the interactivity since we get to choose music while loading and at the ending.... it's still interactive...
i notice alot of u guys praising him for the drawings... letme tell u the truth.. he modeled it in a 3d program like he said in his comments and the computer calculated the rest of the animation for him.... he did not draw it frame by frame especially when the transformation scene plays... but it's still a great technic... just want to let u guys know the real way it was done... i myself major in 3d animation and i'm using Softimage|XSI v1.5
Just need lotsa improvements on grpahics.... plus, learn how to make a preloader.... and... make it stop at the end and give an option to the viewer wether to replay or not instead of looping the whole animation
This is what i hafta say
it's basically all words words and words.... no cartoon animation at all.... graphics... din score much cos used only fonts mostly... sound wise, nice song... but should make a cencored version along with it.... no interactivity at all... style sux... voilence as in song lyrics,.... not funny.... overall, 3/10....thanx keep it up tho... and yeah... learn how to make a preloader.....
This needs lots of improvement
your graphics need LOTS of improvement. I gave 10 for sound cos LP deserves it not u. there was no interactivity. style awefully sux. kinda violence there but some ppl like it. 10 points for humor cos ur graphics kinda made me laugh off my seat.. not the movie quality... overall, u have to improve on ur graphics, timing, and be more creative.... that's all i gt say....peace
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